Thursday, May 8, 2014

The Final, and moving on.

Here's how it turned out!



While it's nice, it's just a good start. Lets think about improving the piece by taking a critical eye to it:

Very liener. Not enough play with the depth moving into the street.
Not enough variety of the windows.
More attention to details needed.
More signs of city life- pipes, planter boxes, vehicles, etc.
More personality to the buildings
A little more grimier.
Castle needs to be stronger. More gothic.
Buildings are too bulky and square. Need to be thinner.

More to come!

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